Friday, March 14, 2008

Life

Today, I wrote a peom. This is first time write a poem in English in my life.

Life

Life is like a cup of coffee
Smells sweet taste bitter

Life is like a marathon
We have to keep running
If you don’t, you will be left behind

Life is like a vagabond
We don’t know where it from
And where it goes

Life is like an opinion question

There is no right or wrong answer
Anything can be the answer

7 comments:

Elaine Soffer said...

I'm thrilled that the blog inspired you to write your first English poem. Do you write Korean poetry?

I really enjoyed the similes you created ("X is like Y"). My favorite, I think, is the vagabond one. Your insights about life are certainly true although I'd like to think that sometimes life really is sweet!

Young Lim said...

Haha...
Thanks...
I will try to write often.

Debora said...

Wow good job!! I enjoy your poem.
Young can you plz write a poem for me?...haha ( just kidding! )

Young Lim said...

haha debora maybe next time..
Maybe..

Debora said...

Young you can try! or maybe write a poem for our class and use each characterizes of students in our class in your poem!!

Elaine Soffer said...

Young,
Debora has really given you a challenge. Good luck!

Young Lim said...

no way ...